Try this part:
...
entry EverythingElse {
if match all {
source-address 0.0.0.0/0;
}
then {
deny ;
count Deny;
}
}
I just finished fighting a similar issue. Without specifying "source anywhere", it denies everything.
In my case I have multiple VLANs where I want to allow routing all VLANs to/from one particular special VLAN, but I do not want to route traffic between the "normal" VLANs.
I'll start a thread on that...